DOLBY

Good to see some drafts here Jamie. I think the font choices and colour schemes as well as images give a clear sense of genre and purpose. I would look at: making the font for straplines easier to read, Making the quality (lighting in particular) of the images better- they are grainy and could be higher spec; the masthead is taking up too much room- I would make the name of the mag on one line only as is the convention.